Week 7

This week we had the opportunity to work on our ads. I was really grateful for the feedback that I received for the ad I put on the discussion board.  I think it is important to write down what others suggest so as to be able to return to it and remind myself of things I need to different.

My Ad 

How I Stay Organized
Checklists Are Key
Tricks I Use to Avoid Chaos
www.myowncreativejuices.com

Classmates suggestions

Tiffany Ray said...The one suggestion I can make on your ad is that it doesn't have a "call to action." I read it and think, "Nice she uses checklists. Perhaps I could look into that." Perhaps should say "Click here to find helpful checklists." Or "Browse through the checklists I use."

Gisabel Horta said…The only suggestion I have is to include an action sentence. How about "Check my tricks to stay organized Or avoid chaos"

Kathy McDaniel said...Vonda, you might want to ask a question in your ad like, "Do you want to avoid chaos?"

Paul Johnson said…For your attention grabbing headline.. my initial reaction was something like.. okay that's nice that you stay organized, but what about me? So I suggest that you may want to switch it up a little and say something like…

Cut clutter and get organized! The other lines could likewise use a little spicing up and gearing toward your visitors... Discover the value of checklists. Learn tricks to avoid chaos